CuteBalletDancer7

I drew this by hand, then used the computer to add color

That was really good. Good job. I like how you didn't know that the main chararcter is a girl till later in the story. Nice ending :). I actually found ...

Can you feel my emotions Emerging from the blue sea Deep in the depths of the ocean beneath us Can you feel my excitement Burning up From the universe high ...

I really enjoyed this poem. It had a nice flow to it. I liked how you add a voice to the bird. It made the poem more animated and added ...

This is a lovely poem. I like the word choice; you used some pretty good words that added the poetic flow to your poem. Also, I like the repetitiveness at ...