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Re: I Can Has Fotograffy?
Wow. These are really good. My favorites are 3, 5, 7, 11, and 12. I like the focus and blur pictures. The ones with the child, I notice that the ...
Jul 6, 2009 -
Re: Fireworks
Here are some of my firework pictures. I used the ASR (advance shake reduction) mode on my camera without flash. * I have a Samsung S630 with 6.0 Mega Pixels. ...
Jul 6, 2009 -
Re: Strange Birds Chapter 2
This is great work. From the first chapter to the second chapter, you kept my attention, which is always a good thing to have. I hope you contuine, even if ...
Jun 26, 2009 -
Re: Running
A man with a black heart He’s the town’s police The meanest One around There is no eye contact No physical touch No crossing his path Unless One wants his ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: Bottle Caps
Hello, I saw your picture of the main characters (which was really good by the way) and I was suddenly curious about the story behind it. I have to say ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: The Last Dance
This is a lovely song. I'm not sure how to edit a song, but I can tell you that the song had a nice flow and good lyrics. "But she ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: animals
Hello There. This is nice photography. The water is so clear and looks great. I love how water affects the rocks. It makes them shimmer and shine, and a bit ...
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: Poem
Hello Ann, Good poem. All you need to do is format your poem like Hart said above. Other than that, it had nice flow and emotion to it. I can ...
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: Thunderbolts and Lightning
Oh my, what a beautiful story :D You did a great job. You had great voice and emotion. I love the rain, and walking in the rain with the one ...
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: Two Lovers
Hello, I think that you did well good job. One way to learn how to shade is to start by drawing a ball in the middle of the page. Then, ...
Jun 21, 2009 -
Re: Just me and You
I enjoyed this poem :) because I can relate to it. Sometimes short poems aren't so good, but I believe that this short poem is good. There are a few ...
Jun 21, 2009 -
Re: Colorful Ballet
Thank you both. I can draw faces, but for this piece the purpose was to hide their faces and have each girl in a different pose. There is a meaning ...
Jun 21, 2009 -
Re: A Geisha Girl
This is very good. You did a good job with the details in the Kimono and in the hair. Good idea shading it in. :) One suggestion is to add ...
Jun 21, 2009 -
Re: 13 reasons why...
This a good poem, with nice voice and passion. I'm really glad that you used poetry to get your feelings out. I like how you use a list, I haven't ...
Jun 21, 2009 -
Re: Heart Break
That was a good poem. :) There were some great lines like: "Eyes of the deep green forest I would travel." "Nights of passion and days of laughter." "Love is ...
Jun 21, 2009
