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Re: Ziva Beaver - a children's story
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May 21, 2018
This is quite a sweet and whimsical story! It gives me some Alice in Wonderland vibes, and I'm sure the illustrations would only add to this effect. There were just ... -
Re: Within my Blood (Chapter 4- part somehwere in the middle)
Sorry that I wasn't specific about the errors! I haven't gotten the hang of quoting yet.
May 20, 2018 -
Re: Hypochondria
Thanks a lot for all the feeback! Really detailed review, and nice that you have a helpful little link at the end! :D
May 20, 2018 -
Re: Hypochondria
Thanks for all the feedback! I do have quite some work to do, and this critique (I believe) was quite helpful.
May 20, 2018 -
Re: Hypochondria
Thanks for a wonderful first review (if that makes sense in this context...)!
May 20, 2018