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Re: The Midnight Dawn
It isn't the same Apple, but I will admit that when I "created" it, I couldn't help thinking of THE Apple... which wasn't actually an apple, but whatever... But it's ...
Aug 9, 2008 -
Re: The Midnight Dawn
This is my entry for Professor Rabbit's Vampire Contest, and my first post in a long, long time. I hope you like it. The Midnight Dawn London Bridge, 2002 Cherubim ...
Aug 8, 2008 -
Re: On Robin Hood and Wheelchairs
Kylan: I have to say that, in terms of creativity, this is THE best thing you've ever written. And the title... man, my heart went warm when I realized what ...
Aug 7, 2008 -
Re: Let's just talk...
Gosh! I realized just today that a spend a LOT of time in this forums, and I could be known beacuse I could critique and write so much more, but ...
Apr 24, 2008 -
Re: On switching sides.
First of all, Thanks. I really appreciate your opinions. My character has finally seen the light, and, in spite of her inicial insecurity, she's now sure which side is the ...
Feb 7, 2008 -
Re: Welcome to Eden
I'm sooooooryyyyy! I did not meant to post this!!!! The fu**ing bug posted it, but it was meant to be a draft. DO NOT CRITIQUE ON IT... God, I hate ...
Feb 7, 2008 -
Re: Welcome to Eden
IT WAS THE BUG THAT POSTED IT FOR ME... IT WAS JUST A DRAFT.
Feb 4, 2008 -
Re: On switching sides.
I'm sorry for posting this so many times. You might have heard of the YWS bug on posting... But I deleted everything now. Just one poll. Sorry!
Feb 4, 2008 -
Re: Big Bug (Important To Read)
1. On switching sides 2. Writing Tips 3. Internet Explorer Hope you solve it!
Feb 3, 2008 -
Re: On switching sides.
Hello! As I have said before, I'm writing a book. What I announced to be the completed prose last year turned out to be only the first part of a ...
Feb 3, 2008 -
Re: The Priceless Bounty
Guys: Thanks a lot for your critiques. They were saved and I've been correcting the text in my PC. See ya!
Dec 11, 2007 -
Re: Del Derecho y Del Revés
Amelia: Thanks for your critique. It's very helpful. I agree in most of what you said... The thing is, let's clear this up: Moanna came first. She was the Princess ...
Nov 29, 2007 -
Re: Vigilante
Well, as I'm taking a tour through your texts, here's my second review. I understood that, being this a flash action piece, you should be fast. It actually reminded me ...
Nov 28, 2007 -
Re: Del Derecho y Del Revés
I don't mean to say I'm from a Spanish-speaking country when I write in Spanish... it's really one of my firsts goes at it... a tip: Don't use so many ...
Nov 28, 2007 -
Re: Night Flight
This is the first story by you that I get a chance to properly review... So here it goes. It impressed me that you could write something like this at ...
Nov 28, 2007
