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Thanks for the review! Yeah, I never mentioned the name of the narrator (that was intentional, though perhaps not the best choice). My thought of having Fay's sibling as the ...

Thanks for the review, and have a great day as well!

Thank you for the review!

Thanks a ton for the review, Thundahguy! You've given me a lot of interesting comments, so I'll set to work on revision. I was a little worried the story was ...

Please review, fellow writers!

Your welcome. And again, great story!

Zee6 Thanks a ton for the review! I was worried no one would read my story, lol. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I'll work on making it a tad ...

Congrats, tb1962! This is an interesting story. Taco Bell is my arch nemesis as well, lol! Now, this needs a little work. First of all, make sure to remember the ...

Thanks a ton for the review, Pan! Rereading it, I can see a lot of what you're talking about. Specifically, the fact that Shrimpy's development was rather rushed. That was ...

Frost is one of my favorite writers! He's so thoughtful, intelligent, and interesting! I'm glad to see some other fans of him out there!

Thank you for the review! By the way, I'm also procrastinating on homework--though I definitely got something out of your review. I like your idea to keep things more ambiguous. ...

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! By the way, I love your name. Homer is one of my favorite writers!

Thank you for the review! The amateur mistakes, especially, I appreciate you pointing out. As you said, the judges will dock points for that, which would really suck! As for ...

Thanks a ton, Pan! Good catch with the father making things up part--that was actually my intention, to make the reader wonder if that was the case! I think your ...