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Re: Saving Earth~Kinderland Chapt. 1
Now, this is an interesting idea. I've heard if before but it's never been really believable; it still isn't, but, well, what can you do? After all, children's immune systems ...
Nov 5, 2010 -
Re: A Reason for Fire, Chapter 1: A Reason for Fire
Huh. Well, I have a few suggestions. 1. Try to slow things down. Don't explain everything; try to show it. Get your readers' interested in one main character's life, maybe ...
Nov 5, 2010 -
Re: Oxygen Thief
With all the fellow Grammar Nazis (I bet you just saw a sudden G-shaped swastika) above, I shall go nice on you. :) 1. That kid is a moron. Even ...
Nov 5, 2010