CrystalSorceress

For Language Arts this year, I have to create an anthology of literary works. It requires that I have a novel, a drama, four short stories (by different authors), and ...

This is something I just wrote down a few minutes ago, so it's not very polished yet. Please give me any feedback you can. ----------------------------------------------------- Fame For as long as ...

Okay, this was a very interesting poem. It definitely caught my attention. One thing about it though, was that I kept expecting something unexpected to happen, like a sudden twist ...

I think that this is a good story, and it intrigued me from the beginning. All together, there wasn't much I saw that needed a lot of change. But I ...

Thanks! I wasn't sure if it was wise to just keep going, but I think now I might be able to figure things out a little better. Thanks again! -Sorceress

I have just finished the first draft of a novel (If you can call it that. It's really short.) and I realized that it was really a TERRIBLE story, but ...

I think that, all in all, this is a good start. However, your paragraphs seem to be divided a little weirdly, so you might want to fix that. Also, there ...

I think that this is definitely a good start. I like the meaning, which to me is quite realistic. I agree with Shasta that the rhyming does sound a little ...

This is a poem I wrote last night in a random fit of inspiration. Hope you like it. The darkness of war It follows us From within ourselves From within ...

The author, for those of you who would like to know, was Marianne Curley. She writes mostly Fantasy/Historical Fiction. I do write some fantasy, although, sadly, the one fantasy book ...

All in all, I think this is a good poem. But there were a few things that confused me. For starters, what exactly does it mean to 'give control'? That ...

I think this poem has potential. It is a little long, but I like the style. It's unique. It seems a bit repetitive at times, so you could probably just ...

I'm new here, so I'll introduce myself. I'm fourteen, and I love writing, and am in the process of writing several books, at the moment. I've also started writing poetry. ...