CrystalSorceress

Thanks, everyone! Your advice is much appreciated!

Today, I was typing up a scene I had written down in a notebook. I was looking at it and realizing that it was really terribly written. Now, I don't ...

Okay, the first thing I want to say is that the ending was wonderful. As Kitty said, in some ways it was a little predictable, but at the same time, ...

I find I have a similar problem, where I go through a phase where I don't get the chance to write anything for a long time, and then when that ...

I really enjoyed this (as usual :-)). On the whole I didn't see a lot that wasn't already mentioned. There was one little nitpick-y usage error, though. I'm not really ...

I liked this a lot (as usual! :-)). I think the story is going in a very interesting direction, and it's quite intriguing. I especially like the ambiguity of the ...

This was a dream? Wow. I never have dreams that would ever be worth writing down. If I could get inspiration that easily, I would be one of the happiest ...

There's a couple of things that confused me here. For starters, I think you should proof read this, because there's many places that were confusing due to improper punctuation. I ...

Hi! Welcome! You know, I felt the exact same way when I found this site. I was thinking, okay, I've been writing for a couple of years, so maybe I ...

I think this is greatly improved from the last draft, although there are still a few little nit-picky things that you might want to change. I noticed that when you're ...

I like first and third. I switch around a lot between them. I change tenses too. Sometimes past sometimes present... I think my writing is getting to be very confused... ...

I think that this piece both shows a lot of promise and needs a lot of work. It actually reminds me somewhat of problems I've had with my writing in ...

The website won't let me listen to the new episode live! :smt089 :cry: Oh well. I guess I'll just have to do my homework instead of listening. :'(

I think that Kitty15 got most of the errors, but there were a few other things that I noticed. “Lady Diana, it is time for bed.” Diana looked up from ...

It's really pretty much any genre or author that I want. But we're not allowed to use things that have yet to be published, and we also are supposed to ...