CrystalSorceress

I really liked this. I've always been fascinated with this period of history and I think you captured it very well. The main thing that really struck me as possibly ...

I've been having issues with writers' block too. It's not that I don't know what to write. It's not that I don't want to write. I'm actually better prepared for ...

Just a heads up, 101 Tips For Writers still isn't loading. I've hit refresh several times and all it gives me is the Dilbert comic.

Budding Writer- Thanks for giving me your opinion! And don't worry, I wouldn't hate you if you told me my writing was terrible. I appreciate constructive criticism. It helps bring ...

Hmm. I just tried that, and it didn't do anything... That's weird...

There are a few notes on this piece. Number one, names like Other World and Council of Elders are probably not going to be the names I actually use for ...

I think you have the beginnings of what could be a great poem here. I think it could be a little better if you maybe added a few words to ...

This was good. I didn't notice a lot of errors; if there were any, I was too involved in the story to notice. :) I really liked how you kept ...

I think what you have here is very interesting. It's definitely not what I expected after reading the prologue, but I liked it. You've gotten me very curious about who ...

To be quite honest, I think you have a great idea here. The writing is also good, but the one thing that bugged me was that the opening part set ...

This character is basically a walking dictionary. She uses big words, and when people look at her strangely, she recites the definition at them. For awhile I've been trying to ...

In a story I'm writing, I have a character who uses a lot of words that no one's heard of. On several occasions, I have sat down at my computer ...

There wasn't a lot I noticed in here that really needed help, but here's what I noticed. They didn’t let go of each other, both letting their tears flood down ...

I think that this has great potential. I loved it, for most of the same reasons as Kepe. I love the idea that the queen was actually trying to help. ...

On the whole, this was good. As Kitty says, go for description, and it'll be even better. I also agree with Kitty on Lady Julia. Everyone else seems to be ...