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Actually, I could come up with a lot with that. Maybe she's a villager who lives near a port, and traders/pirates often come to the village for supplies and women. ...

That is a really good idea. I'll have to try it sometime. Sounds entertaining. :D

I understand what she's saying. It's a scene that takes place AFTER the rest of the book.. Kind of like if you took an epilogue and placed it at the ...

I don't know which editors prefer, or if they even have a preference. Chapter titles can be used to excite the reader: he or she may guess at the meaning ...

Same here. It drives me absolutely crazy. I remember I was editing this one story for my friend and she did not know how to write dialogue correctly. Finally I ...

Personally, I've been convinced that Writer's Block doesn't exist. Anyway, I agree with Jack. Your grandparents won't care if it's the worst poem in the world.. It's the thought that ...

Starting with a scene containing action is usually the best way to go. It pulls the reader in almost immediately. Find where you want to start, then find a way ...

Ah, but some people can't function without outlining. Like me. I at least need to know where I'm headed. Otherwise I get ADD and completely go off topic.. The way ...

Thanks, I might do that instead. And there's much more of a mystery connected to the white dragons than that. But yes, you're right.

They WILL be given names, in time. This is just the prologue, and there are mysteries I'd rather keep with them.. And no, they can't be different colors. That completely ...

Hmm.. Alright, but that still only takes me so far. People don't want to hear "the larger-winged white dragon" or "the male dragon" that often.. I'm thinking about describing them ...

Alright, so I've finally gotten around to editing my prologue. However, I have a problem that's extremely difficult to fix. You see, I have two white dragons fighting a gold ...

Reminds me of lucid dreaming (one way to enter it, anyway) where you tell yourself you will know you're dreaming. Or something like that.

Clocks- Coldplay YES!!!!! I LOVE THAT SONG!!!!!! :D:D:D:D:D

Well.. I've been George before.. :P And Joey. *cringes*