Crysi

*laughs* The sad thing is that I have a tendency to spell things the (British) English way, so I have trouble trying to figure out what's wrong when Word underlines ...

I have a simple solution: I never let my parents read anything I write. Simple. Unless I think they'd approve, at least... But most of my stuff is about war, ...

I'm going to go ahead and move this to Writing Tips -- I feel it's best suited there. :)

Her words never echoed so loudly.

Punctuation can be very fun to use. One can create variety by changing punctuation, and the right punctuation can make a relatively weak sentence into a strong, powerful sentence. When ...

I agree with the majority here - write how you want to write. You have enough to worry about with having to force third person out of you, too. Here's ...

Chinadoll, the first rule in debate is don't make generalizations . Okay, maybe it's not the FIRST rule... But it's definitely an important one, especially here! I've had three English ...

Well.. My only concern is that it's all setup and no real conflict. While it's the first book of five, it also needs to have its own story and be ...

Hmm... That's interesting, but I'm not sure I like where you've ended the first book. What's Dara's goal? What's her main conflict? I highly suggest looking at the snowflake method ...

I think it's a very interesting idea, and I'd love to see you develop it! One thing I notice right away is that you express a lot of the emotions ...

ShadowTwit, that's not the topic. Please keep to the original topic - it's touchy enough as it is, and if it starts to look more like a debate, this thread ...

Saphirus belongs to The Chronicles of Taer. :) Yes, crazy mad swordfighting skills. He's... awesome, yes, but terrifying, my goodness. Anyway. I really do have a reason for posting again! ...

...What if they're truly mysterious AND they wear a dark cloak, eh? ;) *cough*SAPHIRUS*cough*

...The Chronicles of Taer. *cries in a corner* And I just wrote a poem titled "Memorabilia." Guess I won't post it. :p

I'll try. Hey, I'm pretty proud of the fact that I outlined Chronicles - first time I've attempted that. I just need to get more in-depth. I'm going to try ...