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Hmm... Interesting revision, although I don't like the repetition of "bodies." I do, however, like the line, "Subtract us from the world." I think that makes a more powerful statement ...

Miyaviloves, I'd like to remind you that this is not a critique on other people's critiques. If you really read Incan's comments, you'll see that he does give constructive criticism. ...

Gal, I suggest you take a look at the NaNo site and read what it's all about. My wordcount? 13,498. Yeah, couldn't bother to fit two more words in for ...

They are now. ~Kiens Who's this Livny guy? I want to meet him. ~Strikard Strikard, pay attention. Yes, politics have always played a large role in my life. ~Rhynaedus Do ...

Hmm... I find that I'm always really excited to get to the ending, and that's what keeps me writing. I know that the next scene will set up a certain ...

Strikard always seems to come up with nicknames for everyone in the company. He either calls me 'farmer' or 'Kie,' which gets very old, very fast. ~Kiens I've been called ...

POST! Jeez. Everytime I see there's a new post on this thread, I rush to check for more chapters. Oh, and I hope you don't mind - I'm basing one ...

Soundtracks are wonderful. Also, a lot of people on the NaNoWriMo forums participate in word wars. Basically you write as much as you can for a set amount of time. ...

We are the lovers of the world. We submerge ourselves entirely in the waves cast by others. But there are sharks in the water, waiting to tease and tear our ...

10564. Finally broke 10,000. This makes me very happy, as I have remained ahead of schedule for five days in a row, the first five days of NaNo. I've figured ...

Are you kidding? Any color looks good on me! I make those colors look good. ~Strikard I don't know. I always wear brown or green... Earth tones, you know. ~Kiens ...

Haha, nice El. I did that last year. 7235 , and I'm going to bed. Luckily, if I can't write much over the next two days like I think will ...

5676. *is proud* The day's not over yet, either. I have a feeling I won't be able to write much in the next two days, so I need to get ...

Haha, Wiggy said what I was thinking: Pirates. Just the whole "I can't feel warmth or cold" part, really. I have to admit... As much as I'm a fan of ...

Shut up, Jack. :P 2380 words, and still working. Much better than my first day last year, where I only got 384 words. (Imp, don't worry about it! You can ...