Crysi

Giving my view of it gives the artist an idea of what ideas are being portrayed through it. Now, perhaps they mean nothing to him now, but I didn't know ...

To be fair, since it is a Storybook, Siam can do what he likes with the characters. As you said, the story could go anywhere.

I would definitely join! However, I don't know how you want to run this. Would you like us to choose from characters you've listed, so we would each control one ...

Well, it's certainly... erm... interesting... I'm assuming it's meant to be completely nonsensical, and thus, you shall get a completely nonsensical critique. Or, rather, you would if I could manage ...

Exactly. We're not flaming it or calling it crap, okay? It's a style of art, whether you like it or not. If you don't have anything CONSTRUCTIVE to say (and ...

...WOW. Normally I don't venture into the Non-Fiction forums - I generally read to get away from reality, you know? But... wow. This was fantastic. I love how you maintain ...

Amazing, Imp. In fact, Saphirus has agreed to back off for quite some time now, just because you posted this. ;) There are a few minor blips, like one or ...

Haha, I love the fourth one, where you get just a peek of the clownfish... Silly thing. :) Very cool!

Yes, I believe so. ~Crystalia Not particularly. I'd rather not run the risk of my child having to live the way I did. ~Saphirus As long as I'm not around ...

I'm gonna do this a little differently and actually write out the scene - just because I haven't written in a while and I think I need it. Saphirus was ...

...Hmm. Okay, so this is a start... but where's the rest? I can't exactly critique something that doesn't have content.

Catalina looked up at the young man beside her. His grey eyes held wisdom far beyond his seventeen years. His blond hair moved with the wind as if it had ...

We're not starting this debate again, kids. *gives stern look* Brad, these are really cool. :) Inspiring, too. I kinda wanna break out my colored pencils now...

So. I'm far from being published (well... I take that back. I've had a couple poems published, and one short story in the school's highly selective literary magazine of which ...

Yeah, I'm not very good at keeping it secret which poems of yours got in, huh? *laughs* Oh, do you know if there's gonna be another local anthology? Not that ...