Crysi

I wrote a parody of bad poetry once. To be honest, it sounded very similar to this. Basically, it's a good idea, and we've all felt it before, but... that's ...

"Hey, it's not like you could help it, right?" What would you say if you realized you had read the initial information on a test wrong, causing you to get ...

Hmm... Yes, I suppose they are games, in a way. I consider them training exercises. They challenge my apprentice and build up the weak form. More mind games than anything, ...

I absolutely love it, Snoinkers!! My thoughts went like this: "Oh no, she drew Daniel? I have to see this. *clicks* Wha...? Oh, that's cute. She drew an abstract to ...

Teehee. Very cute. I might steal one of these someday.

So, basically, I want to read/buy anything you write. You have so many interesting stories!! If you ever stop writing, I'll shoot you. That, or I'll send Saphirus your way ...

I'd join you if I could, bob. :P Hah, Jiggy - you're the second person to tell me that. You'll get over it. ;) Why'd I cut it? I wanted ...

Okay, kids. Finally got some halfway-decent pics of my new haircut. Remember when my hair used to be all long and pretty? Like this? Yeah. Then I got it cut ...

Crystalia. ~Saphirus Seeing the sun rise on a spotless field. ~Crystalia A nigh with that chick around the corner. Which one? Take your pick. ~Jehklar Do you consider yourself innocent?

Hey, Hope! :) Welcome to YWS! Poetry and fantasy, huh? Very cool. Those are generally my areas, too. And I'm just starting to experiment with scripts and such - I'm ...

Crystalia. ~Saphirus My wife. ~Rhynaedus Nope, not really. They were all idiots. ~Skye What's the one topic that makes you depressed everytime it comes up?

*sigh* Brad... I keep getting the feeling that this has happened before. Like, every "episode" is the same. Jonathon and Kyle fight, Jonathon gets all pissy/emo, Kyle ends up with ...

...I had a bloody post here, and it left me. Anyway. Don't interrupt Jonathon's dialogue with Kyle's actions - you do it a few times. There's a long string of ...

Brad, I really don't like the end when he starts crying. He's a crybaby throughout this whole thing, it seems, and it just doesn't fit his character to me. Or ...

So, basically, because you have about a million and two of these, I'll just be pointing out things that could be improved. I was confused at first about what was ...