Crysi

Saphirus looked around, quickly, cautiously. None of his senses hinted to the killer's presence. Must be new to the trade... Lost his nerve at the sight of blood. Stooping down, ...

Guardian. It's what I do, it's who I am, in every sense of the word. ~Saphirus Do you generally get to sleep easily, or are you an insomniac?

...Three isn't a bad number... *cough* Okay, so mine's terribly cliche. I came up with the idea when I was eight, give me some slack! Really, though, I think there ...

Yay! Excellent tip. Sometimes we get so wrapped up in the plot that we forget to make our characters real and relatable. (Firefox is telling me "relatable" isn't a word, ...

Ah! Yay, I'm green again! *laughs* I honestly thought it was just my new Firefox scheme... It's changed a bunch of weird stuff (such as the fact that now it ...

*rolls eyes* Did you two completely miss the mention of NON-alcoholic drinks? Sheesh. *tosses ROOT beer to Alex and Dan* Bek. Alcohol in your spaghetti? I think I'm gonna have ...

Hey HeadInTheClouds, I'm just going to quickly skim in this critique since I REALLY need sleep tonight. I agree with those who said it was too cliche, and I'd like ...

I'll definitely take a look at it, since we seem to have the same problem (and similar titles). I'm planning on outlining mine using the snowflake method. I've been working ...

So. In case y'all didn't know, today is Meshugenah's 18th birthday. I figured that, since she's such an important member and all, it would positively be ILLEGAL to not have ...

SPEW? Have anything to do with Harry Potter? Nothing and everything. You'll see. Anyway, even your welcome message impressed me, lol. I like your choice of words (although I must ...

Every move is thought-out. Practically. ~Strikard Actually, Saphirus has mentioned a few habits of mine that I never noticed, such as the way I lean in when someone else is ...

Haha. Actually, if you really listen to conversations, you'll find that most of the time people talk about themselves. People feel really good when you start talking about THEM instead. ...

I don't know... I feel like this is more of a conversation than anything else, like it's something you'd say to me if I told you I was considering dropping ...

Okay, so, spell check is your friend, and it's even a free added option when you go to post. Just a first thought. Second thought: Why should I, as the ...

It was... interesting. Not completely new, but not completely cliche, either. Personally, I like the [admittedly fractal] part, brackets and all. I'm just not sure about the line length. At ...