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Yeah. Can we sort of bend the historical part of it for now? As much as I love researching stuff like this, I'm a bit lazy and a bit busy ...

Jacqueline sauntered along the docks, checking out the items displayed on the tables of local merchants. She paused at a pretty looking glass. Touching it gently, she decided to move ...

You'd better PM me, too, darlin. ;) I jumped when I saw this thread was updated...

Hey now, be optimistic! We've got some pretty great writers joining these ranks; don't back out now! If you intend to join, then join, and no excuses or saving spots. ...

Joanna, against her better reasoning, climbed out of the Bronco. "Honey, listen to me," she said slowly. The other girl, Abby, looked around nervously as if she were trying to ...

...Yeah, that makes about as much sense as the actual novels. I really do feel like I'm caught up. XD Thanks for that. Now, why do we need Bradikins' lovely ...

That's adorable! I especially love the ending. The names are fairly ridiculous, but so is the story, so I suppose it can be forgiven. Of course, "Meg" doesn't really fit ...

Name: Jacqueline DeMortel (Jacquie for short) Age: 19 Ship: She's in the market, as it were. ;) Allegiance: Pirates, although she's willing to spy and betray if paid the right ...

Hey, just a quick comment for all those posting about my character -- her name is Joanna. With an "a" at the end. Dono started the confusion... ;)

Disclaimer: Unfortunately, I do not own any characters, ships, songs, or rum from Pirates of the Caribbean. Also, I do not own the song at the beginning, although I can’t ...

Joanna wrapped her arms around her, cursing herself for not thinking to bring a sweatshirt. Her skirt and short-sleeved shirt did nothing to block the breeze that crept up. She ...

I think I'm gonna move this to Writing Activities. What's the activity? Well, people can attempt to write one-sentence thrillers, or imagine what follows. *shrugs and smiles as the thread ...

"I believe this belongs to you," Jo said slowly, taking the pen out of her hair and holding it out to Ashley. The waitress looked uncertainly between the two tables. ...

I thought it was pretty good... I just have a few nitpicks. :) At the very beginning, Mary seems uncertain and not entirely awake. After the first paragraph, though, she ...

Pat Buchanan. Actually, I agree with Mesh. I used to be a critiquing fiend, but now, it's more just making sure everyone is keeping in line and stuff. I'm gonna ...