Crysi

They're all wonderful, Fabien. You really have a talent for capturing the natural. I really like your titles, too. They only help to enhance the images. :) Gorgeous.

Ari -- these are all gorgeous! I think my absolute favorite is the one with the bench, though. There's just something about it that seems so peaceful, and yet seems ...

They don't know what's so fun about shooting an empty can of beans with a rifle--is it the way the can jumps into the air on a successful hit, the ...

Same here, Bek. Looks like I spoke too soon when I rejoiced about it all being fixed.

Mm, this is a great start, Jack. I apologize for not getting to it sooner! Just a few nitpicks: The food is boiling, perhaps for too long, because the hot ...

Overall, I thought it was okay. The sentences are simple, and so they don't really capture my interest at first. Someone else mentioned the show-don't-tell rule, and it's difficult to ...

Good eye, Imp. That's the last time I type up a hand-written piece... Anyway, glad you liked it. I'm making your changes as we speak. ^_^ (Saphirus has no problems ...

Oops, how did I miss that typo? I read that sentence about a million times... *laughs* Thanks. Fixed. Glad you liked it. :)

“I always liked the ocean.” Silence followed Skye’s comment. He continued, looking at the quickly-fading sunset. “Our castle is inland, and Mother never liked me to be near the shore ...

(OOC: Oy, sorry about that, Imp and all. I've been meaning to add, truly...) Jacquie thought for a moment. "Well, I'm not sure I know of any respectable inns from ...

Day 1, 7:28AM Jo shivered. She had volunteered in enough hospitals to keep a clear head, and she had patched up her parents' drunken wounds enough to not mind blood. ...

Joanna's motives: 1. Get the hell out of town. 2. If possible, save her parents, much as she hates them. 3. Get the hell out of town.

Good luck, Jack! :)

Mm... To be honest, hon, I don't really like it. I'm sure we've all felt the feeling you're trying to express here (I know I have), so you need to ...

...But they're dead. XD That's the point. Not every story is action-adventure, and not every scene in Pirates involves getting shot or stabbed. This was more of a psychological piece ...