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Re: Why You Should Love CCF
Eeeeevilllllll, that's what it is! *throws a grenade and runs away*
Jun 25, 2007 -
Re: Dinner For Two
Oh wow. Morbid, much? This is really sad. I love the point of view you decided to go with, though. At times, however, it didn't seem like he was seven ...
Jun 25, 2007 -
Re: Dancing Fairy
This is indeed the place for it! :) Just a little nitpick -- the legs are a bit off, both in shaping and placement. If you follow the upper leg, ...
Jun 24, 2007 -
Re: Dreams of Suicide
I laughed, at first, but then I realized that's actually a brilliant thought, too. Very clever combination. It could really go either way, you know? Potential energy turns into kinetic ...
Jun 24, 2007 -
Re: The House on Swift Street
You know, I think the problem with this is that it just doesn't have a point. Why should we care? If there was a divorce or some other constant problem ...
Jun 24, 2007 -
Re: Looking For A Partner
If anyone still needs someone to co-write with them, I'm more than willing. :) I like any genre except romance, and I'm a huge fan of internal conflicts. I don't ...
Jun 24, 2007 -
Re: O Captain
The ship sat still in the water, undisturbed by the ripples cast by the patrol floats that had come out to investigate. It seemed the world held its breath as ...
Jun 24, 2007 -
Re: Memoir of a Mormon [McHasting’s Golden Arches]
What's with all these cannibal poems? Was there a challenge I didn't know about? *laughs* This was... pretty good, but some of the rhythms and rhymes were off, so it ...
Jun 24, 2007 -
Re: Anyone want to correct a French essay?
I'm sorry I didn't see this sooner! What French level are you in? I'm hoping it wasn't due yet, but I have a feeling it was. If you still need ...
Jun 24, 2007 -
Re: Lit. Analysis/Summer reading
Yay, I'm done with English forever! *laughs* Anyway. Quotes always earn bonus points. Once you choose a quote that represents the idea you're trying to explain, you should explain how ...
Jun 24, 2007 -
Re: something i wrote to vent
It's a word, Tep. I think I remember something about Woodrow Wilson using that word to convince the nation of his plan, but I'm not sure. Anyway. Who doesn't know ...
Jun 24, 2007 -
Re: Satan And God
I see what you're trying to say, Tep, but it's not working for me. *laughs* See, you're going off the assumption that they were banished because they knew the truth. ...
Jun 24, 2007 -
Re: Rate avatars!!!!
5/10. It's a cool shot, but until I know exactly what it's supposed to be, I can't give you a higher rating.
Jun 23, 2007 -
Re: Lunch Time
...Claudette, this is not helping your claim that you are not a disturbed young lady. You have a good rhythm going, and the rhyme helps the whimsy. *laughs* There's really ...
Jun 23, 2007 -
Re: Satan And God
Mm, I see what you're saying. However, I always took that to mean that they would die spiritually, which they did. They severed their connection with God in that moment. ...
Jun 23, 2007
