Crysi

Do you care about anything?

Alright, so I've finally gotten around to editing my prologue. However, I have a problem that's extremely difficult to fix. You see, I have two white dragons fighting a gold ...

Hmm.. This was good. Not one of your best, but still good. The only part I didn't like was the "three magic words." That's just too.. common. And it doesn't ...

When was this thread created?

*laughs* Alright, here you go. Full edit, by request. Forgive me for being harsh; it's my editing style. Nothing against you! The inky black sky traced Luke's outline through the ...

... Am I the only one very disturbed by that? *ponders and walks off* By the way, those images are HUGE!

:P Showoff.

I really really REALLY love this. You have no idea. I can't even begin to describe it.. Just... amazing. I run out of adjectives so quickly lol! But really, this ...

*blinks* VERY old. But I like this.. and I absolutely LOVE the last two italicized lines. It's so.. venomous. I can picture it being said with a harsh sneer on ...

..Absolutely amazing, Jack. Yet again you've brought words together to form the most meaningful poem.. Beautiful. I love how the last stanza brings a somewhat sensitive touch to the almost ...

LIIIIIIIIIINK!!!!!!!!! My preferences, in order: 1, 4, 3, 2. As for a rank.. I like the ones Arvy suggested.

:roll: Oh, and TBR.. Remember you can edit your posts instead of adding a P.S.

*grins* I recognize this! Very nicely done! My only comment for now is.. He prayed for his girl, Miriah, whoever she might be. She had a long life ahead of ...

..Isn't it pathetic that I keep thinking you're talking about band concerts? I was about to say, "No, we have Graduation on Friday" but then I realized you were talking ...

Wow, you have an ostrich farm? That's cool. More about the Komodo Dragon's "poisonous bite.." The reason it's so deadly is because it contains millions of bacteria.