Crysi

Hmm.. It's a little choppy. Other than that it's alright.

Didn't it go that way?

You are by far one of the best writer's I've come across. This is just so POWERFUL. I love everything about it. You've mastered the emotions and movements of these ...

I agree with Nikki. I'm a Christian, and I've had to think long and hard about it. The Bible says it's wrong, sure. But it's hard for me to accept ...

*sits this round out, for once*

I. LOVE. THIS. Wow Mesh.. Wow. You never cease to amaze me. I knew you were an excellent poet, but when you get emotions behind skill.. This is absolutely amazing. ...

Why would I let the dogs out?

I've thought about that before, too. Who decided they were "bad" words? That's what frustrates me, because I'm not allowed to say words that simply express emotion or punctuation.

Who let the dogs out in my pants?

Who let the dogs out?

Hey, sometimes those words just work. Besides, if you're writing a first-person narrative, or even a third-person in some cases, if the characters talk that way, why not use them? ...

:roll: You wish darling, you wish. Ah man! I'm not the ass I really am... Hmph! What the hell is wrong with you?! What was degrading about my post? Surely ...

Don't you know I was just kidding?

No, I was simply naming the hot guys we have on our side. We're the sexy women who look good and defeat the bad guys with a glance. ;)

For once I agree with BS. Shocking. Although he's not completely innocent of it.. :P I do need to clean up my language. I'm starting to fall back on curse ...