Crysi

Resent the government? I AM the government! My father may be king, but the realm listens to every law I lay down. Most Sindrykans respect me for that and obey ...

LOL. I love this. It's creepy and hilarious and... wow. I love the flashback, lol. Poor girl. Cute story, though. Even if it is a bit... well... you know. ;)

Yes, yes, it's all very good and all... BUT WHERE IS THE SINGING QUARTET?! Hmph.

Personally, I think you'd get tired of it after a while. I saw it in the stores too and thought it was cute, but really, how much entertainment can you ...

Keep it on topic, please. Thank you. Anyway, that's an interesting point. I think there may be more female writers in the world (although I haven't done any research on ...

Jacqueline, You have not been keeping up with the story. It is quite pathetic. You have barely begun the Parade, which should be short and simple compared to the rest ...

AHHHH THOU BE EVIL! *The power fo Christ compells thee!* (Is probably teh only person in the world without a myspace anyway) Nope, I don't have one either, although that's ...

Oh Jack... You're so amazing. I absolutely love how the title contrasts so wonderfully with the first stanza, and yet you made a reference to the "bitter cold." I agree ...

8/10 Arvy, don't bring personal feelings into this. If you have a problem with it, keep it to PMs or blogs.

When I critique, I try to find every little way to make it better. I don't want to rely on other people to fill in the blanks. So I apologize ...

Jack! I order you to smile more often! And I'm loving the long hair. DS, that's so cool! I want to go to Israel. My church goes every once in ...

I second (third?) what 'Reida and Mesh said. The quartet is totally awesome. This whole thing is awesome, actually. Go Grif!

Yeah, I JUST wrote this tonight for my homework assignment, lol. Your two cents are appreciated - I'm trying to decide if I should workshop this at school and I'd ...

If only my mother were a stronger person, If she possessed that wildfire instinct That would let her say, “No,” and mean it, If the luminescent stars on my ceiling ...

Merci. :) I tend to write how I speak, and I didn't comb over this as thoroughly as I could have.