Crysi

I've actually found that the inverted pink and inverted purple skins are quite similar. I'm still trying to think of colors... Man, for a synesthete, this should be easy! Hmph. ...

5'8" and 127 lbs? *grumbles* I hate people who are both taller and lighter than I am, lol. Anyway, this is pretty awesome. There should be an accent over the ...

I don't. ~Saphirus Do you like art? If so, what kind? Music? Painting? Dancing?

You know what I've always wanted to try? An order of fries, Animal Style. At In-n-Out. I know like the whole secret menu, but I haven't tried many. So. Anyone ...

Yeah. No. No. response to, "Oh, I didn't know you were awake. Did Dad tell you we're going to the Asparagus festival in Stockton? Do you wanna go?"

Bobo, I love you. Seriously. Marry me. ...Or not. Anyway, these inverted skins are totally rocking my socks off! I'm such a fan of them. They're darker than the YWS ...

The easiest way to hook a reader is to begin with action. If you have to read through half the book in order to get to anything interesting, there's a ...

Training. Swordfighting, managing dark powers, or simply increasing my efficiency, a simple slip could prove fatal. And so I delve completely into the act - perhaps not completely, as I ...

Blob, it'd be nice if you actually broke your paragraphs into coherent sentences... :roll: lol. Okay Shadow, finished critiquing the piece. If someone has already said something I have, oh ...

Seconded. ;) I also heard one's quite the hopper and could probably seduce the enemies... although the other three would have to keep her from having real feelings for anyone ...

Well... Yes and no, Snoink. I once read a Star Wars book (can't remember the title... Shadow Hunter, maybe?) where the story was mostly from the point of view of ...

...For a moment I thought you spelled "BEETLE" wrong. *head/desk* I've been listening to too much music lately... Anyway, I think it's very cute. :)

Never to the death - that wastes your efforts. Only foolish amateurs kill unnecessarily. No, there are ways to get information out of even the most stubborn peasants. Everyone has ...

OMG, LYKE I TOTALLY AGREE, THIS IS THE BESTEST STORY EVVAR!!!! DUDE, U R LYKE SO 1337. I

Gah, I'll have to add this to my list of things to critique when I have more time... Just a quick note, though - exposition is NOT your friend. It's ...