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  • Fantasy Novels Re: Melancholy

    I'm sorry, they're typos. It should be After drying myself and shovers should be shavers . I'll edit it.

    Aug 22, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: Greetings

    Yeah, Claudette, its me, Shadow. The guy who posted a load of pictures on the Picture thread. :D And I only insulted YWS members because they insulted all of us ...

    Aug 22, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Red Sunrise (updated 21.8.07)

    A Red Sunrise (version 2!) It was early dawn, the sun just breaking over the horizon, shining off the sea. A few of the bolder waves lapped against my bare ...

    Aug 22, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: Greetings

    Thanks, guys. I'm not as nervous now as I was before. I might have insulted a few YWS members who came to our site, but only because they came to ...

    Aug 22, 2007
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Sorceror's Descendant-Prolouge:Dark beginnings

    Prologue – A dark beginning Lightning flashed across the night sky and rain poured down endlessly from the heavens as Kyvor slowly made his way up the winding path. His ...

    Aug 22, 2007
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Sorceror's Descendant-Chapter 1: Summer's end

    Chapter 1 – Summer’s end Seth sat at the breakfast bar, absently eating a bowl of cereal while lamenting the end of the summer holidays. He had grudgingly woken up ...

    Aug 22, 2007
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Hy

    I'll read the next part. I'm curious about these "tree people". :)

    Aug 22, 2007
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Melancholy

    In the deepest reaches of darkness, pain engulfed him like a second skin. Searing, relentless pain. Gashes covered his body so much that he was lucky to have lived. There ...

    Aug 22, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: Greetings

    Yeah, I write Fantasy Fiction. Also Fantasy Horror if I'm up to it. If I ever post poetry or lyrics, please shoot me. :) I'm currently writing a Fantasy to ...

    Aug 22, 2007
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Hy

    Well, it was good, I must say. There are a few problems I noticed, though: 1) I was quite confused when you mentioned his brother having a tail. I thought ...

    Aug 22, 2007
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Supernatural & Me

    Well, its quite good. But I think you shouldn't have the girl leave her body. I think it would be much better if she did all of that and she ...

    Aug 22, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: Greetings

    Hello, YWS. I'm from the Teenage Writers Forum. Right now you're probably filled with hatred at me, but I assure you, I'm not here to cause trouble as some of ...

    Aug 22, 2007


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— Phyllis A. Whitney, Guide to Fiction Writing