CrossMyHeart

It sounds really interesting and I'm sure it will become a great book, but there are some mistakes. 1: some punctuation problems, don't forget: commas are your friend! 2: Fingures ...

Aw! That is really sweet of you. I loved how much feeling you put into it, you must have really cared about your neighbor. I think the flow was alright, ...

I really liked this, but there was one thing that threw me off. As I watch the seasons change, Winter's gusts and winds and snows Begin to come like ocean's ...