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  • Short Story » General, Fantasy Re: The Story Of My Mind

    Hi, Thanks for the review and I agree on the content about the character. After first writing it I felt I needed to fill it out because there was really ...

    May 17, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Fantasy Re: The Story Of My Mind

    Thanks and no offence taken at all!

    May 17, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Young Truth

    Thanks for that feedback! Glad you enjoyed the read

    May 7, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Narrative Re: Of Dante and Silken Fire

    Thanks for the feedback, Im glad I could help you in some way. More than anything, any suggestions made a way for me to simply pull those areas "into the ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Young Truth

    Thanks so much! Will definitely have a think about your suggestion!

    May 6, 2014


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