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Re: Kingdom of Gold {chapter 1}
I like your characters very much. They have personality and it shows in their speech. What I think you need next is a few more descriptions. How are they feeling? ...
Jul 6, 2009
I like your characters very much. They have personality and it shows in their speech. What I think you need next is a few more descriptions. How are they feeling? ...
Jul 6, 2009
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