Crimsona

:o Thank you so much!I've taken this all into account, and I have Pm'd you. (again >.

Thank you so much for this review Sporky, it has really shined some light on what I really need to improve on. :) So, I decided to rewrite the 'burning ...

:o Wow! I certainly wasn't expecting such good feedback for this piece of nonsense! xD x.x Reading over this again, I realised I changed the rhyme scheme about ten times, ...

I really love the words you used in the poem, and the way that it is dedicated to your friend. I actually found this poem extremely moving, and loved the ...

First of all I'd like to say that this terribly short review doesn't do justice to the beautiful piece of art that you have created. But this is sheer genius, ...

I really love this poem. Even though it is rather long, I really think that you captured the soul of this piece. I do love rhymes, so this poem won ...

Hey there Oony! I've always loved your story, and the more I read it, the more I like! Only one complaint... You need to write more!

Is anyone interested in Critiquing this?