CrimsonRose

help is this a reasonable start to the beginning of a 2000 work story based on Shakespeare's sonnet His eyes, so perfectly bright and lovely, never look at me. They’re ...

god. never read slash before.. shocked yet suprised at how well you write this.

i like this, it reminds me of a close friends style. i agree about the arm and the shoes... but a lot better than i could ever do, congrats.

its great, in my opinion. i think you could expand on it a little. possibly write a sequel. but great i loved it

not a fan of all the dialogue, but aside from that i like the story line, its very creative. Scary yet great. good job

The sting of the white concrete under foot. Gazing up occasionally, passers-by wave with good intentions, surrounded by the gray cold clouds, I find their intentions hard to receive. The ...

i am growing less fond of your writing style everytime i read. i think the story is a bit too boring. \ the end however, breaks my heart (being a ...

"where is your homework?" "I left it in hell with my soul. Don't tempt me god damn it! I will slowly ruin your life"

The soft dim light of the hall helped set the mood for the motion. The Woman so slowly gliding down the dusty portal, the particles of dust creating a mist ...

Great goal kickers glide gracefully, growing greater NEXT LETTER IS P

They felt the urge to pull it apart slowly it and then make it into a backyard sculpture WHY DID THE BOY PAINT THE CURTAINS CRIMSON?

This i find is good. I mean i wouldn't go and give it an award but i do like the style of the piece. Maybe the end half could have ...

Her hair swirling around with the playful wind. Her lips red like a crimson sonnet so perfected they could be sculptured by angels. Her grace, her poise and her appearance ...