Crimson

My Corner: Thank you Lulu, I can't believe I missed that. Gah, bad Crimson. Anywho, this chapter is rather predictable in my opinion; oh well, win some, lose some. Comments, ...

It's really a nice begining, I want to keep reading just to see how it all turns out. I wonder what Janey will write about...especially since she isn't writing what ...

My Corner: Thanks Mad, I went through my file on Word and the 't't' didn't show up. Something must've happened when I copied and pasted so I'll know to keep ...

I couldn't have said it better than Claudette myself. There's no depth to the character or the setting, and not as interesting as I think you're probably capable of deep ...