Crimson

This was a real pleasure to read. I found it funny and Dennis has an unusual charm about him. Granted, I'd never want to meet such an unlucky person but ...

The typos were already mentioned so I won't point them out again. I liked the story but it feels like it just sort of dropped at the end, the ending ...

It was rather bland to me and I had a flash back to Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets . There wasn't much description so I didn't get a ...

I like perspective stories like these, but at the beginning it didn't feel like that at all. It just felt like...a prediction [where parts of it seem very possible in ...

I really liked it, I love little perspective stories they're so much fun. Anwyay, this sentence I felt could've been worded better at the very end. You wrote... Why can’t ...

I do hope you pick up this story again, it's not crappy at all. I want to know why they broke up, it sounds like they break up was a ...

I adored this! I can't think of a single thing that could make it better, it's so good. I loved all the emotions in it, and how you expressed how ...

I really, really liked it. I'm curious as to why he wasn't in the state to fall in love with someone. The only thing I can think of that needs ...