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Re: when theres a shooting star.
One day I'll see a shooting star. I'l probley wish for something irresponsible, Like A car. But like they say wishes never get you far. Life is full of wishes ...
Nov 8, 2010 -
Re: The Angel - Rated 18+ (STRICTLY!!!!!!!!!)
Ok this poem is Great.:) It shows how you felt and also what you she looks like. I dont know why people are asking how does this fit in dramatic ...
Nov 8, 2010 -
Re: Touchable
Hi first Hello.:) Im sorry If i come on strong, I am just very blunt. I think your poem is kind of a mess. You were trying to show the ...
Nov 8, 2010 -
Re: Reality
I love the idea you were trying to reach, I just dont think you accomplished it.:/ I'm sorry but i'm going to be very blunt. the poem could of been ...
Nov 8, 2010 -
Re: The Cost
This poem is really Interesting, I kinda Love it!:) one thing is that i think you should first re-read it before posting it. The poem rymes, but not on a ...
Nov 8, 2010 -
Re: Just the worlds toy.
Everyone says she wants to be the center of attendtion. but that is not her intention. It comes naturally, and most of the time she doesnt want it. but she ...
Nov 8, 2010 -
Re: Hi Im new:)
Hi im new My names Lindsey. Id like to know everyone eles name so message me if you want a confersation. Thanks Lindsey,.(:
Nov 4, 2010 -
Re: Broken Memories
Your poem is really good. It has great meaning. Thanks for sharing.:D
Nov 3, 2010 -
Re: You've Got A Friend In Me.
This poem Is fantastic....:D I really like it, its veryy cuteee.
Nov 3, 2010
