CreativeFreak

Hi. :) Um, yeah. Like Elinor already said, the very beginning of this poem is confusing. It's like you're trying to hard to be poetic or deep? The key to ...

Hi, you can call me Freak if you please.. Nice piece here! Nitpicks: a world of trials and vicory *Victory Only problem. Good job. Really good and deep poem. It ...

Hello. Nice to meet you. You can call me Freak, but if it bugs you, which some people do get bothered by, you can call me Fry. :) Need a ...

Hi, NikkiLow. This is a very good piece and it kept me intrigued for the whole time I was reading, it made me want to read more. Great job. Sometimes ...

* This was an assignment for my English class. It is based on The Old Man and the Sea . As the wet ground crumbles beneath his feet He carries ...

Hello, nice to meet you and read some of your work. It's very good actually I have no idea why no one commented yet. Maybe the length, but either way ...

Hello! Call me Freak! :D Okay, so this picture is...interesting and not in a bad way, it's actually really good. But I don't understand what this is so I'll just ...

Hello, all! Call me Freak, Fry, CF, etc, whatever you want except something that will hurt my feelings x) Anyway, I was bored so I decided to log in and ...

Well, just one suggestion: listen to Owl City, PLEASE! :D

Hello Trans (nearly everyone here has a nick-name, mine being Freak, CF, [my real name]Patty, or Fry [personal one between one other friend which you're still aloud to use anyway ...

Hello again. :thud: Nitpicks and comments: The beginning line is very sweet and really cute, I like it. Mind if I use it sometime? :lol: When the waves of hate ...

Aw you're new!! Well then, welcome to YWS! I shall be your friend now x) Call me CF/Freak :D and now that an actor we know nothing about has died ...

Hey Conrad. :) CF here. This is very good and intricate. I didn't find any problems with it grammar wise, but the whole some of the names: Perhaps Hades and ...

Hello! CF/Freak here :D Well, personally I kind of hate the rhythm. It is too fast and seems obnoxious (I don't know how to explain it, but it simply annoys ...

Hello, CF/Freak here :D Nitpicks: This beginning starts out kind of boring, you need to catch the readers attention; just a note. Punctuation- The whiteness at the centre of the ...