CreativeFreak

Hi, call me Freak or Fry, if you will. :) Nitpicks! This whole poem has problems with punctuation; you need some commas here and there, and in some places you ...

Hi, call me Freak or Fry, if you will. :D Nitpicks! I like this poem a lot, and the end was a very good surprise, but there are some things ...

Hope you like this as much as my friends do. :? *************************************************** I don't know who you are anymore... Could you be my friend? Or possibly an acquantance? A boyfriend?

Hi :) I really like this poem. It is so cute, yet so realistic! My favorite part was, It shows how a human might want to kill, How respect turns ...

I just want to be friends... What we had, some might say it was special, but I call it a lie. You never loved me, you don't know what love ...

Hey there! This poem I just find really dramatic and annoying; and to get to the point, I hate it. I see what you are trying to do, but this ...

*I love this poem so much. Me and my friends wrote it during a lunch period and I think it turned out really good. Your awkwardness burns like dry ice ...

I have an obsession, It's a horrible one. Don't know how long I can stand this oppression. Waiting and waiting for my sister to get up. Holding and holding 'till ...

Hi again! Okay. I literally squealed at the end and clapped my hands! I love this so much!! I think you did a really good job expressing the feeling of ...

Hey there. :) It's good to see some new people posting automatically! Hehe. Nitpicks: What if the world came crashing down you scream but they don't hear a sound? You ...

Hi, there. This is really good. I liked it. What kind of took me by surprise though was: that's a fucking mystery The curse word. Yeah, I'm not saying I'm ...

Hullo, there! :) I like this piece a considerable amount: great begining, people can relate. Good job. Nitpicks: Immediately Anna let out a scream and jumped. The boy retreated, his ...

Hi, there. :) I actually really liked these! The first one was very good and probably the one I enjoy the most. It hap depth and its chosen words really ...

Hi, Forest. I like this poem. It was very deep, but the only thing I felt wrong with it was that it was a little too repetitive. Besides the, "I ...

Hehe, the beginning is funny! :) Hey there. I liked this piece a lot because even though it is really long, once you start reading you can't really stop, and ...