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Re: What Else Is There To Say About Hitler?
* Hi. So, this is for my World History Final Project and I'm posting this up so I can get any help or suggestions. Appreciate any critiques. A ll day ...
Jun 8, 2010 -
Re: Descending to Who I Am
I've noticed: As my life gets worse my creativity inflames. I am like a spasm - hard to stop on your own. I can't escape from this place, from this ...
May 29, 2010 -
Re: What he said to me
Hi, I'm Freak. :) I really like this poem, but it is really unorganized. It's cute and whatnot, but you need a lot of help with your punctuation and grammar. ...
May 24, 2010 -
Re: The Neverending Battle
Hi, I'm Freak! :) I really liked this poem and I found only one thing wrong with it: To protect their fellow man I feel that the word "Man" should ...
May 19, 2010 -
Re: In the [Insert Appropriate Sensory Organ] of the Beholder- 1
I was just wondering about the quote. But PM me for when you do cut it so that I can review it :)
May 17, 2010 -
Re: In the [Insert Appropriate Sensory Organ] of the Beholder- 1
Hi. I'm Freak. :) I just want to make a quick comment (I'm not actually gonna review this, because it would take two hours). You should cut this in half. ...
May 15, 2010 -
Re: The Slick Floor Chapter 6
Hi. It's Freak again. :) I'll just list the nitpicks again. :) Sorry if it's really long, but again, bear with me. that leads into the bathroom, shutting the water ...
May 15, 2010 -
Re: The Slick Floor Chapter 5
Hi. I'm CreativeFreak, but call me Freak if you will. :) I'm just gonna list the nitpicks and small explanations, since this is such a long piece. Now I know ...
May 15, 2010 -
Re: Time doesn't speak
Hi Thana! :) I'm Creative. I liked your lyrics for the most part, but they seems kind of immature. Although it is original it annoys me. Lyrics need to be ...
May 11, 2010 -
Re: Cakes and a Photo
Hey, Tam_Ara! :) I'm Creative. I like your pictures. It's a combination of cuteness and reality. Awesome. Okay, so 1st picture: I like this one the best. And like Phoenix ...
May 11, 2010 -
Re: A jar of glowworms and stale memories
Hi - Creative! :) I like the first poem a lot; listing all those good luck charms that don't work and then the metaphor about sidewalks and whatnot. Very clever. ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: The Secret of Life
Hi - Creative! :D I don't mean to offend but this poem bad. But that's OK. You're new; you'll get better. First of all, and I know I have no ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: Silence
Hey - Creative! :D So you are not untalented! You are actually very good at poetry. Hehe, consider changing that name. :) So, this poem is very good and it ...
May 9, 2010 -
Re: I am me.
Hey, call me Freak or Fry, if you will. :D This poem was...original, but really boring and predictable. It doesn't show my feeling, deepness or intensity. Needs work, but you're ...
May 2, 2010 -
Re: Dark December
Hey, call me Freak or Fry, if you will. :) This poem is very good and deep. I like it although I can not closely relate. I didn't really find ...
May 2, 2010
