CreativeFreak

Hi, Tabithalillian. :) Some of these picture are good, but here are my critiques: #1: The setting doesn't really match the outfit and look the girl is wearing. It looks ...

Hi, superchipmunk. Nice name. :) I read that book too. Really cool. I didn't exactly get what your were trying to say. I think it was the repetition of "Never ...

Hi there, Galerius. :) I like this poem, and thankfully I read Life of Pi , because I believe that book gave me a better understanding about what you were ...

Every ten seconds my reborn shadow fades, taking a little bit of me with it. All that's left are my past foot prints and me tracing them. As I make ...

Hey, Litehawk. :) Good job giving the moon a personality and even feelings/morals. This is such a cool poem. I couldn't find anything really wrong with it, so that's cool. ...

Hey, there, Hibiscus. Nice poem. Really nice. The first stanza starts off catching you; getting you (the reader) hooked, so that's awesome, and you have some really nice metaphors that ...

Hey, there! Good work here. :) I'm Freak. I really like how you did extremely good descriptions, they were amazing. The ending was really awesome and, again, the descriptions were ...

Hi, charmcaster. I'm Freak. :) I'd first like to start off by telling you that this is a good poem and very easy to relate to. :D Nitpicks : You ...

125 pages...wow. x) Good job.

Hi, RedRaven. I'm Freak. :) So I like this whole story line...er, plot. It's so different and inexpressibly interesting. That first part was a little confusing, I don't know if ...

Hey Big_Cheesy_Grin, I'm Freak. :) I thought this was a good start; it has lots of potential and could be so much better. So, first I'll start off with telling ...

Hey Captian. I'm Freak, as you can see. :D I like this poem, very easy to relate to, but I got annoyed after the first two lines. This is just ...

Hi, I'm Freak. :) I kind of like this poem. It has it's good points and its...really silly points. I'm not sure if you just put together a whole bunch ...

Hi, I'm Freak. :) I really like this poem. It's is fairly realistic and easy to relate to. Good beginning that grasps the readers attention pretty much automatically. Nitpicks: To ...

Woah, Jen! These are so cool and pretty! Keep up the good work. All I would suggest is to work on your view and angles, if you know what I ...