CreativeFreak

Hi there. :) This is a really cool, good poem and I enjoyed it so much, but there are nitpicks: Rumors, cars, people another comma, you're listing things mischievous faces, ...

Hello! Not much to work with here, but I will make do! Behind closed doors is where I lie. Behind secret walls is where I hide. With all my fears ...

Hi, Victoria! :) Welcome to YWS. I hope you enjoy it as much as everyone else. Raybans are the chizz(My awesome word, you can copy it, I give you permission ...

Hi, hi. :) These were actually really good and creative. The first one is really cute. The second is kind of boring, plus her leg looks really muscular. :lol: The ...

LOL. I have no idea how to review this, because it doesn't seem like a story, and it's, like, a whole bunch of ideas, plus there's no grammar wrong that ...

Hi. :) I like this story, but I think in the beginning you are focusing too much on what he is doing and not so much on what he is ...

Hello, retrodisco 666...that end part scares me, but okay! Great job, it's like a movie in my head. This is such a cute, real, relate-able story and you did a ...

Hello! :D This is impressive, you're better than me already!The imagery is amazing...There's nothing else to say. :) Good-Great job! Write on.

Well, I don't know the rules of Haiku's sooo, anyway! I like this. It's funny and I like that "Ah!" part. Your descriptions were good and the ending was fantastic. ...

Hello there! Ok, so I like what were trying to do here. I got your story but the punctuation didn't help my comprehension. From the very beginning I didn't know ...

Hi, there! I really like this poem: the beginning was captivating and by the end of the first stanza I knew what you were talking about. You have great descriptions, ...

Helloooo! :D This poem is pretty cool, but I don't get the point, I don't get what you were trying to say. I mean, I like the story, but to ...

I hated those stories of riots and wars, When you used to think that the fact you were a musician would make me like you that much more, When you ...

Hi, Crimsona! :) I love this poem! It's so cute and funny. The rhyming is very clever, heehee. The thoughts and feelings you put into it were so fitting as ...

Hi, Kuhleri. :) Really cute poem. Surprising at some point ("It's not even about the ones who love you."), and the end were some true, deep, original words. Good job, ...