CreativeFreak

Hope you like!! How I crave to hold him in my arms; to feel him, his touch, his heat, and his lips: so soft, so smooth, and so desirable. I ...

Okay, i don't think there were anyproblems with this. It was very well written, and i like it. I hated getting to the end 'cause i wanted to read more!! ...

Hey there! I like the beginning of this. It caught my attention and kept me going. But i did find a couple nitpiks: “I’m not doing this.” I whispered, faced ...

This is extremly good! I only have one nitpik that caught my eye though: Or maybe that early morning where you and Riley and you stayed up all night and ...

Okay then. SSo helpful! x)

:D Thanks.

Oh...I feel like a fail!! :( Well, thanks for the help. And i don't really capitalize the I's, 'cause, well i just don't, but i willllll fix that, since it ...

Although the romance doesn't come in yet, this is supposed to be a romantic story.. Chapter 1: The first meeting. My mother, better known as, "That drug addict", to pretty ...

Uhh... :? I liked the peom, buttt i couldn't understand it, probably 'cause i'm much more immature, stupid rather :cry: , than you are, soo....yeah. But i bet if i ...

Personally i think this peom is really good. Compared to the other peom i read by you, it didn't confuse me. Ahaha :D. But like ZaddieCaso i agree about the ...

If you type something random, it can be Anything ! 1. I'll respond with something that has to do with what you typed/wrote. 2. I'll tell you which song or ...

Ahaha! Those above were hilarioussss!!!! xxxxDDDD So today i was outside for an hour or so hangin' out with friends. I was bored so i grabbed a peice of paper ...

In 2006 my birth date read as 6/6/06 (Almost the Devil's number) For that whole week i was called the female anti-christ.. :(

Trust They don't believe me They don't trust me I've made mistakes But that's all said and done People lie People cheat But you learn your lesson eventually At least ...

Hey Elly Charm, uh.... :? Well, first of all this was written very well. It was was very deep too, i liked it. :D Second: Even though i liked this ...