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Re: The forbidden love in my fantasy
Hello, CaptainRandom! :) I'm Freak. This poem was too cute. :D But , it needs work. Nitpicks: It would seem wired Do you mean "Weird?" if we were together (Period) ...
Nov 14, 2010 -
Re: The Voice In My Head
Woah! This is super long!...Oh, hi there. :D Ayee, Ranger Hawk, I'm Freak...I think we met, but otherwise, it's nice to meet you. :) I really love the first stanza. ...
Nov 14, 2010 -
Re: All The Faces - Inspiration
Covered faces: can't tell who is who. Impossible expressions you can not read. But what happened those neighborhoods where you'd see open doors and open blinds so everyone could behold ...
Nov 5, 2010 -
Re: Bound by Cold
Amazing. :) It must have been really cold where you took these pictures. :lol:
Nov 4, 2010 -
Re: Last Art Dump
These are amazing! Great job and keep up the good work. :D
Nov 3, 2010 -
Re: End of the Year Thoughts
At the end of the school year, last year, when I was in 9th grade, my English teacher told us we had to answer a single question. I chose to ...
Oct 19, 2010 -
Re: Charmed Soul
Oh, I get it now. Pff. Wow, I should have seen that. Thanks. :)
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: Charmed Soul
Hey there, Foxy. I truly love this so much. You've got some freakin' talent! :D Nitpicks: Everytime 2 Words (Every time) I hear your euphonic whispers in my ear, my ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: Invisible Gestures Don't Equal Brutus Betrayel
Hello, LP! I'm here! Late, but here. Okay. *Tugs on shirt* Let's get to work. :D If Hercules wanted fame, instead of life, if Gandhi chose to be selfish and ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: HEELOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO people
Welcome to YWS, Jordon! :D I'm Freak. Archaologist, huh? Cool. How'd you get into that? I hope you like writing too! What do you like to read? Favorites? Feel free ...
Sep 30, 2010 -
Re: The Army (BVB)
Hi, screamandshout. This was very strong and extremely good. It was well written and had a fairly good flow to it. The only thing that I did find wrong with ...
Sep 5, 2010 -
Re: He is waiting for you
Hey, Iamnotperfect. I like this poem a lot, it was very good. The only thing I didn't really like was: Always present even when you don’t think about it, the ...
Sep 5, 2010 -
Re: My Art
Hey, LisaMCooper. :) The human you drew was pretty good, but it was bad quality in my opinion. I couldn't see any arms, but the fact that she doesn't have ...
Sep 5, 2010 -
Re: Elliot (Chapter 1)
Well, I'm a girl. :)
Sep 5, 2010 -
Re: Beyond return. (First post on YWS!)
Hi, and welcome to YWS. :) I like this poem, the beginning starts off good but the contents are simple. Your punctuation is pretty bad though, you need a lot ...
Sep 2, 2010