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Re: The YWS Adventure
Me wants to be the villain! *Snicker Maniacally* Name: Freak (Typical, for a reason ;D) *Pops out from bushes...or something..Depending on where we are now, xD* Hello, the only thing ...
Nov 23, 2009 -
Re: The Oddities Of Seattle
Name: Alyssa Marion Age:24 Personality: Evil, cruel, creeper, kind to only the people she loves and even to the ones she's starting to love. Picture:Um..Long black hair (up to her ...
Nov 23, 2009 -
Re: The YWS Adventure
I wanna join!?
Nov 23, 2009 -
Re: The Oddities Of Seattle
Gonna post soon :)
Nov 23, 2009 -
Re: Paper Piano-Chap. One
Aw this is so cute!! I loved it so much. I wasn't paying enough attention to the grammar to help you out on that, it was just way too good! ...
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: I love my Music.
Hello! Call me Freak. First thing I noticed: Is the iPod floating in the air or resting on the very edge of your thigh? 2nd: Is...that..her nose? And what's that ...
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: The Christmas Tree that never left
Hello! Call me Freak, if you will. Let's get started with a nitpick: Christs "Christs" is possessive, so it should be: Christ's. And that it's, great job, keep working, you're ...
Nov 20, 2009 -
Re: An Adult's View of Halloween
Hello! Call me Freak, if you like. :D Well let's start: Pretty much you need a lot of commas, I wold post them, but there are just too many. Make ...
Nov 20, 2009 -
Re: On Becoming Woman
Hello! :D Call me Freak. Well... Only then the Siren Sounds Is this a name(Siren Sounds), 'cause other wise I don't know why you capitalized it... Great job! *Claps appraising* ...
Nov 20, 2009 -
Re: Math
Math I see the numbers Stretching across the paper. Multiplying property, Addition. But I don't understand this. You. I'm trying to figure you out. An equation. You. You confuse me, ...
Nov 20, 2009 -
Re: "Emo" Poetry vs. Good Poetry
Well, you don't know exactly if they are "Emo." What if the person is really bummed, but they just aren't so good at writing? See it all depends on if ...
Nov 20, 2009 -
Re: Mid Fall's Charm
Hello, Bed!! Hope you don't mind if I keep calling you that :D 1:Okay, although this was blurry I liked how it was focused on the stem of the flower. ...
Nov 20, 2009 -
Re: The Diner
Hello! Call me Freak :D Now, I am not trying to be mean, but this was kind of boring. Personally it didn't grab my attention once I started reading, which ...
Nov 20, 2009 -
Re: The Tears of Martyrs
Hello! Call me Freak, if you like. :D Well, let's start. First of all you kept capitalizing things, words: Salvation I don't know if you're trying to emphasize this, but ...
Nov 20, 2009 -
Re: Cruel
This is very good actually. It flows real well and the vocabulary is used great in the spots used, :D I don't really have anything to correct. Yeah you're are ...
Nov 20, 2009
