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Re: breaking windows inside your head isn't safe *edited*
Well, this is a good story. I like the concept, but you should use caps and proper punctuation. Also, it could use more descriptiveness. You don't tell us who 'she' ...
May 9, 2014
Well, this is a good story. I like the concept, but you should use caps and proper punctuation. Also, it could use more descriptiveness. You don't tell us who 'she' ...
May 9, 2014
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