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Re: The Dark Angel of Peace Chapter 1
Trees, a couple bush, more trees, a couple of cars, some people walking, even more trees...They whiz by as if it’s only a dream, unreal. Planet Earth, the Most High’s ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: The Lost, Chapter 1
To start off, I would like to say that it was very well-written. You captured the detail of the emotions of your character quite well, although it was a bit ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: The Keeper Chronicles #1: The Dark Angel of Peace
Prologue He pushed himself off the ground, balancing on little unsteady legs and standing up. He had fallen, tripping over one of the many toys and trinkets strewn across the ...
Jul 5, 2011
