CrazyCara

I think it's great!! Wow. Very delicate, lovely language that sets the tone great. I do agree with Persephonia that you might want to make it smoother. I think it's ...

I think it's a little simple..it's a great emotional thought..like in that small equation we can feel your lonliness; but maybe if that were the title and you wrote a ...

Hey!! I'm Cara and I'm 14. I've been writing ever since I could read :D I'm horrible at poems but I love creating stories. Obviously, I'm new and hopefully I ...