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Re: The Lucky Bureaucrat
Thanks for the feedback! I'm sorry some things were unclear, but just to clear it up: I did make the storyline come full circle just after Jin is not believed ...
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Re: From Bad to Worse
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Mar 1, 2016
This is a review. Good job! You have a nice plot and the story was fun to read. Just a couple things to say: You have quite a few run-on ...