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CourtlynJ

CourtlynJ

  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Wishbones

    Wow. LOVE this. Positive: Imagery is fantastic. It really evokes a sense of nostalgia, yet stays rather mournful. It's relate-able, down to earth, and feels....the only word i can think ...

    Jan 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Spiritual Re: There Sits a Judge

    I really like this! Positive: Imagery is great. Content and idea is great. Negative: Might work on grammar/punctuation/etc. Also, your metaphors aren't quite consistent. First he's a judge, then he ...

    Jan 14, 2013


Why should Caesar just get to stomp around like a giant while the rest of us try not to get smushed under his big feet? Brutus is just as cute as Caesar, right? Brutus is just as smart as Caesar, people totally like Brutus just as much as they like Caesar, and when did it become okay for one person to be the boss of everybody because that's not what Rome is about! We should totally just stab Caesar!
— Gretchen Wieners