CourtlynJ

Wow. LOVE this. Positive: Imagery is fantastic. It really evokes a sense of nostalgia, yet stays rather mournful. It's relate-able, down to earth, and feels....the only word i can think ...

I really like this! Positive: Imagery is great. Content and idea is great. Negative: Might work on grammar/punctuation/etc. Also, your metaphors aren't quite consistent. First he's a judge, then he ...