Cotton

Hey there :) I won't pretend to know your story, but I have noticed that there are some grammatical and punctuation-related things I could help you with, so I'll probably ...

me again... I just realised I forgot to mention something I noticed, so I've being going back through my past reviews to find the story that had it in... convoluted, ...

oh I just read your replies... I forgot to check the box "notify me when a reply is posted" which was silly xD I'm really glad what I said made ...

Hiya, me again. Sorry, but there was something I forgot to mention, because I'd read it before but then I came back to your story later on and was so ...

Thanks again! I've actually been inspired to write some more poetry recently... Odd for me, and it's not very good, but I had this weekend about world issues and all ...

Hey! Thanks for the extremely swift reviews! Wow, I am very touched. Just in response to angel23, thanks for the suggestions very much! I do actually quite like some of ...

Aha this reply is incredibly late! Oops... never mind. I just wanted to say a big thank you to everyone who has reviewed (although most of you probably won't read ...

Oh no absolutely! I know I'm being annoyingly contrite, but even though it felt a bit odd to me - probably because it was the sequel to a book I ...

To winie603: thanks! yeah, on it's own it's not a specifically interesting story, but I also didn't want to make it too long. So thanks for the advice - I'm ...