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Yeah, I did originally write this in the past tense but switched to present halfway. I thought I had switched everything but obviously not... thanks for picking that up. I ...

Thank you for the review! I hadn't noticed the iffy writing in the lines you mentioned - they've been fixed. As for the prologue, it's been mentioned by other people ...

I get what you're saying about the prologue but the problem I saw is that this is a legend known throughout the world - especially to those who live in ...

Fair enough, thanks for giving it a try. I only posted these two parts together because I figured the prologue would be too short by itself to work as a ...

Many thanks for your in-depth review. I'll try to rewrite Hilda's lines to make them sound a BIT younger (as you said, not too much) but she kinda needs to ...

I'll be going into more detail on Valnr hierarchy and how they work on the next chapter, as Ryouma puts Hilda through Scion 101. Hopefully, that'll shed some light on ...