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Re: Cigarette
Sorry about taking so long to reply, been away for a little while. Thanks Lezalean and Cheesy, Narachel, and Mollytate for your reviews/posts. Narachel, theres more than nicotine killing this ...
Jan 14, 2010 -
Re: Don't take me back to reality
Hello NaRachel, and welcome to YWS. I really enjoyed reading your lyrics, they had really rhythm, and you used very nice rhyming. In the bold is the only part i ...
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: Song stuck in your head?
Cumbersome by Seven Mary Three
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Cigarette
Cigarette By Corwin Clampitt Cigarette cigarette sitting in my hand Never can, never can I forget Never will, never will I understand Wishing I, wishing I had a hand to ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: a hero of war
Really reminded me of the song Hero of War by Rise Againest, " A hero of war, yeah that's what I'll be and when I come home they'll be damn ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Smile (an absence of confidence)
Yup song lyrics.
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Black Magic
Well when i wrote this, The night before i went to the Bar and all my friends i graduated with last year all came down and we partied, after the ...
Jan 1, 2010 -
Re: Smile (an absence of confidence)
Smile (an absence of confidence) By Corwin Clampitt Smile upon a face Better keep it on ‘Least till their gone ‘Cuz their known to criticize Often victimize maybe terrorize Smile ...
Jan 1, 2010 -
Re: Black Magic
Black Magic By Corwin Clampitt Closter phobia kickin in Walls are getting thin But I’ll be fine Just show me the line It’s getting shorter ever time Harder to define ...
Jan 1, 2010 -
Re: Ashes
Oh thanks very much glad you enjoyed it
Jan 1, 2010 -
Re: Helllo =)
Hello, my name is Corwin I'm from Alberta Canada. I just joined the site not to long ago, I have two of my song lyrics posted, "Rain" and "Ashes". Although ...
Dec 28, 2009 -
Re: Ashes
Ashes By Corwin Clampitt When time starts shaking N earth starts quaking Don’t know where life’s taking me Somewhere there’s a key To this life’s mystery Your words get duller ...
Dec 27, 2009 -
Re: Rain
Hey thanks for reading if you did. Please rate and leave a comment. Thanks, Corwin
Dec 26, 2009 -
Re: Rain
Rain by Corwin Clampitt In the days in which im dieing from the pains i have been hiding looking for answers to questions im denying put on a fuckin smile ...
Dec 26, 2009 -
Re: My Requiem
Very nice! I felt real emotions when i read this, really liked it, keep up the good work!
Dec 26, 2009
