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Re: The Queen of Dolls
haha.... I really think this is great. The idea and the writing. Good job.
May 15, 2006 -
Re: writing challenge 4-17
'Rapture me,' you sang to me, 'Please succumb my soul from this wretched body.' I apologized, and refrained from doing so. 'Apathy,' you explained, 'Is greater an opiate than religion.' ...
May 15, 2006 -
Re: Breathing the Green Girl
The first three lines are perfect. But then I'm not feeling it until "My arms..", which, that and after is great as well. I think it's the 'Saguaro', but I ...
May 14, 2006 -
Re: The Bed of Debauchery
the dream is based on an actual one.
May 5, 2006 -
Re: The Bed of Debauchery
This is the beginning of something I have a novel size idea for. It's pretty choppy, this is the first draft. ________________________________________________ It’s her again. A little different then
May 5, 2006