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Cornelius_Quinnsomer

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Cleft

    In each man doth cupid sits poised, stringing his bow, singing, though inaudible his voice. For long ago was his body done in, now flies he in spirit, name's now ...

    May 3, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Guilt

    This peice is finished and isn't that great and can't really ever be. Write something new now.

    Apr 10, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: A Memoir

    A simpleton once tricked himself And thought that he could read. He read himself to death And 'ventually did become a seed. In that lifeless form the seed began to ...

    Jan 8, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: Wishing for Atlantis

    You clay dolls Swimming around in my head. You clay dolls Spitting feathers, Into bottles That left You laughing. This is the folly: You've never let go of me. Our ...

    Nov 7, 2006
  • Lyrics Re: A couple of songs I wrote

    These are a couple songs ideas I have been dabbling with. Let me know what you think. Try to listen to each one twice, they might seem a little strange ...

    Oct 30, 2006
  • Other Poetry Re: Jade

    Thank you for responding, and hello to you too. Your profile is very impressive. (Questions)-- Though, what do you mean by machine gun lines? Got it the first time? In ...

    Oct 16, 2006
  • Other Poetry Re: Jade

    I posted this in dramatic poetry a month ago... but I would like critique from the people here, mostly from Brad, but also everyone who has something to say. So ...

    Oct 15, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: off-key

    The second stanza is very TOOL (...Lateralus)-esque. All in all, the emotion definitely goes deep. The ending is great.

    Oct 15, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: some slam poetry

    I really liked this. A lot. As for the feminism women praising.... Come on now, girls and guys and men and women are all the same. Rather, we ought to ...

    Oct 2, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Despair/Rescue, my Twins

    I really like the first half of the first, and the second half of the second. The words 'cut' definetly make it and complete it. The middle however gets repeatitive ...

    Sep 29, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Innocence

    I like this. Very real, though some parts a little cliche', but still (touching on/ somewhat) raw and very real. I can feel it.

    Sep 29, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Jade

    thank you. Greek--- Dionysus: God of Wine Eros: God of love, lust Eluetherios:The liberator, Dionysus and Eros were both referred to as; responsible for freeing one from one's normal self, ...

    Sep 28, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Jade

    A colour poem I had to write for creative writing. -------------------------------------------------------------------------- Your eyes, so insipid with such a masquerade of illumination, Reflecting a

    Sep 27, 2006
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Into your landscape

    I suppose an example of awkwardly perfect would be Johhny Depp in Pirates of the Carribean.

    Sep 22, 2006
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Into your landscape

    I sat down awkwardly perfect and met eyes with the Women beside me. With my eyes still and stolidly fixed on hers, I blinked heavily with arrogance to let her ...

    Sep 15, 2006


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